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Kill What Hurts
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I reach,
For one of the bottles,
Something inside me,
Tells me to stop,
That what Im doing,
Is wrong.
That I cant do it anymore.
That I am killing myself.
I reach anyway,
Grip the bottle.
Bring it to my lips
And take it long,
Deep draw.
It burns my mouth,
Throat and stomach.
For the briefest moment,
I feel complete.
The pain I carry,
Disappears.
I feel comfortable,
At rest, confident,
And secure.
i feel good.
Damnit I felt good!
The feelings,
Leave as quickly,
As they had came.
I want them back,
Ill do anything.
I take another bottle,
It doesnt work.
Bottle after bottle,
i drink,
Nothing works.
Instead of feeling better,
I increasingly feel worse.
My only option is,
To try and kill.
Kill what hurts,
Kill it.
For one of the bottles,
Something inside me,
Tells me to stop,
That what Im doing,
Is wrong.
That I cant do it anymore.
That I am killing myself.
I reach anyway,
Grip the bottle.
Bring it to my lips
And take it long,
Deep draw.
It burns my mouth,
Throat and stomach.
For the briefest moment,
I feel complete.
The pain I carry,
Disappears.
I feel comfortable,
At rest, confident,
And secure.
i feel good.
Damnit I felt good!
The feelings,
Leave as quickly,
As they had came.
I want them back,
Ill do anything.
I take another bottle,
It doesnt work.
Bottle after bottle,
i drink,
Nothing works.
Instead of feeling better,
I increasingly feel worse.
My only option is,
To try and kill.
Kill what hurts,
Kill it.
i wrote this last night. Beware it is kinda dark...Hope you enjoy it!
© 2006 - 2024 Scorpion-Heiress
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VERY nice. One of the best I've seen from you I think. Your structure in this one is more... solid? That's the word that comes to mind at least.
Awesome job.
Awesome job.